I like it, but I must protest about the number of syllables in the ultimate line. Perhaps a removal of "Pond" is in order? Thanks for introducing me to reverse haikus, I've never heard of them before.
Good point! I modified it, do you like the new version?
I actually just made up the "reverse Haiku" thing... maybe it exists already, but I've never heard of it. It just fit my mood :-) You should write one, it's fun!
I don't have a reverse haiku for you, but thought I should let you know, that you writing that poem is just one of the many reasons why I love you. I'll get you a good reverse haiku soon . . .
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I like it, but I must protest about the number of syllables in the ultimate line. Perhaps a removal of "Pond" is in order?
Thanks for introducing me to reverse haikus, I've never heard of them before.
Good point! I modified it, do you like the new version?
I actually just made up the "reverse Haiku" thing... maybe it exists already, but I've never heard of it. It just fit my mood :-) You should write one, it's fun!
I've always been a fan of your poetry! Will you post that one poem that we all memorized and used to recite? Do you see them... ?
I don't have a reverse haiku for you, but thought I should let you know, that you writing that poem is just one of the many reasons why I love you. I'll get you a good reverse haiku soon . . .
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